18.5.16 (Wednesday 18th May
Once upon a time there was five sisters. Their names were Riya, Eva, Nora & Clara & each got a necklace. But one of the sisters didn’t get a necklace. She was Really angry. She was so angry she stole the necklaces and through them up in the sky. The four sisters cried so much that the sea got really salty. So salty that the fish in the sea got sick but they got better again. The fish did not mind the salty water after a day. The four necklaces all went together and that is our moon to day. If you are lucky you can see a man in the moon. The necklaces made a picture of a man. The beads went every & that is the the stars that you can see with the moon.
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WOW! Sophie what a creative narrative. Your narrative follows the structure we have learnt about.
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